Below are some student examples you can use to discuss pictures, pacing, and sound

The Center for Digital Storytelling has some great examples of personal narratives:

Here are some stories that will speak to teens:

The Barnum Neighborhood Oral histories from Denver Public Library:

Barry Matchett's Oral Histories at DPL:

A student example:

English Project on Voicethread:

The DPL Western Geneaology Department: